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I would like a private word.

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I would like a private word please.

You tell us you are personal and immanent, but at the same time we are shown that we are disposable and abortive to you. Unwillingly dragged into this alcoholic world by the crown, from that lucid dream we should have resided in, I have to ask the question that sits predominantly at the front of my consciousness. Can we believe in that which cannot make up his mind?

Similar to foxes, we are haunted daily and hysterically I screech your words into the nightmare. Rebelliously I take my pen to the steadfast pillar you planted, concentrated in front of us. Innate whisperings guide my movement, barely heard over the animal dim that you designed - mechanical in nature. As I carve my many questions into your goodness, my eyes fall over the distinguished tributes you gave to us. You are apathetic to everyone and as I sit in the dark corner with the rest of my people, drenched in alcohol and ethanol, with powder on my face and up my nose, shivering in winter's cold as accepted calamities crush us, I scrawl over the righteous paper and acknowledge I do not believe.
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MMBaird's avatar
Since I am not a dA Premium member, I will have to do it here...
So...
I am in love with your vocabulary, it is so adequate for this, err, fragment I should say? Anyhow, I love the vocabulary.
I personally love the part of the sentence that goes:

"...I screech your words into the nightmare." Ten out of ten on this one.

I am startled by what you are saying, but please, don't take this as a bad thing. It is a very interesting piece: you've got a way with words that is enviable.
Kudos :)